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NaruSaku- OYE ch. 5 by ~Mistynia:iconMistynia:



Talking: “....”
Thinking: ‘....’

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto

Open Your Eyes
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Chapter 5: Fireworks and Cotton Candy

It seemed like the weather Gods were hearing Sakura’s call; it was the perfect weather for the summer festival. Sakura woke up with a smile, already looking forward to tonight.

Naruto thought so too. He felt he was dreaming the last three days. He feared he was going to wake up today, just before they went to the summer festival.

“Ouch!” Naruto exclaimed as he pinched himself. ‘Well,’ He thought. ‘you can’t be too sure.’ He did his morning ritual, which included eating breakfast at Ichiraku’s. He walked outside, greeted by the already warm morning sun.

‘It’s going to be a perfect day today!’ He said to himself, grinning.

He already reached Ichiraku’s, until a familiar voice called out to him; “Hey, Naruto!”

He recognised the voice, “Iruka-sensei!” Naruto exclaimed, turning around to greet him.

“Getting ramen again for breakfast?” Iruka asked smiling, actually already knowing the answer.  

Naruto grinned, “Yep! You want to join me, Iruka-sensei?”

Iruka laughed, “So I can pay, again, huh?”

Naruto put his hands behind his head, “It’s for a good cause. I have to save money, you see...”

“Saving money? For what?” Iruka asked, a bit confused.

Naruto began to blush, “For tonight...”

“Mh? Tonight’s the festival right...? Don’t tell me... You have a date?!” Iruka asked dumbfounded.

This made Naruto blush harder, “S-so what?! Yes, I have a date! A-although, she would never call it a date...”

Iruka put his hand under his chin. “Oh? Then, it’s Sakura?”

“W-what?! How do you know, Iruka-sensei?!”

Iruka laughed, “Let’s discuss this inside, shall we, Naruto?” He led Naruto inside Ichiraku’s. As they sat down, ordering their ramen, they continued the conversation.

“So,” Iruka began. “you finally asked her out?”

“Finally? What do you mean by that?” Naruto asked, as he got his bowl with ramen.

“Well, it obviously you have a crush on her.” Iruka said, calmly.

Naruto blushed like mad, “I-I don’t know what you are talking about, Iruka-sensei!” He sputtered. Has it been that obvious?

“Come on, Naruto! It’s been obvious! You always had a crush on her since the Academy!” Iruka said, laughing. “So, who asked who?”

“Well,” Naruto said, his blush disappearing. “we actually asked each other at the same time. See, she came yesterday to my house to ask me. But we ended up asking each other.”

“Really? She wanted to ask you first?” Iruka said, a little shocked.

Naruto nodded, “I don’t know what happened, but it just turned out this way.” Naruto said, as he finished his bowl.

“Do you love her?” Iruka asked suddenly, seriousness clearly seen on his face.

Naruto did not flinch. He didn’t sputter, he didn’t go in denial. He blushed a bit though, thinking about his answer.

But he didn’t had to think for long, he could say for certain. He turned to Iruka, his blue eyes almost piercing him.

“Yes.”

That was his answer, no doubt heard in his voice.

Iruka smiled, seeing how much Naruto has grown. Not only in Ninjutsu, but also about personal things. Much like love.

“Do you think she’s in love with you?” Iruka now asked a difficult question for Naruto.  

Naruto looked down, “I don’t know.” That was true, he really didn’t know.

“What makes you think she doesn’t?”

“Sasuke.” Naruto said, clearly saying his name.

Iruka sighed, he knew that this kind of answer would come. “She still loves him?”

“She waited for him again, three days ago.” Naruto said, tightly gripping the fabric of his pants.

Iruka sighed again. “But doesn’t that mean that she just wants him back?”

“I don’t know,” Naruto said again. “but I’m almost certain she doesn’t feel anything like that for me.”

“Almost?” Iruka asked, a little smile seen on his face.

“I can always hope, can’t I?” Naruto said, looking up to Iruka with a little smile on his face.

“Yes, you can.” Iruka smiled.

“Well, thanks for the ramen, Iruka-sensei! I gotta go now! Are you going to the festival too tonight?” Naruto asked, standing up.

“Ah, well, who knows.”

“Great! I see you then, maybe!” Naruto said, as he ran out Ichiraku’s, waving.

“Do your best, Naruto.” Iruka said, as he began to pay the bill.

-6:30 PM, Naruto’s house-

The day went fast, but that didn’t bother him. He couldn’t wait until he got at the festival. His clothes were, yet again, simple; long, blue pants with on top of that a simple black T-shirt and an completely orange jacket to finish it.

He wondered what Sakura is wearing. Is she going to wear a kimono, or just regular clothes? He couldn’t wait to find out.   

He looked at his watch; 6:45. He should began walking. As soon as he stepped outside, he felt a cool breeze caressing his cheek. He looked up; it looked like it’s going to be a starry night.

‘Heehee, nothing can stop this night!’ Naruto thought.

Suddenly, he bumped into someone. But it felt soft, like pillows. Naruto didn’t mind the feeling, until he heard a very, very familiar voice.

“You like that, don’t you punk?!” An annoyed woman’s voice called down to him.

He looked up, still covered in the softness. His eyes went wide.

“Tsunade-obaasan!” He screaming, taking a step back. “Why did you do that?!”

“Tsk,” Tsunade retorted. “the nerve. You bumped into me, punk.”

“Right, well, gotta go, I have to go to the festival!” Naruto said, and just as he was about to leave, Tsunade called him back.

“Ah, Naruto, about that!”

Naruto stopped, and turned around. “Mh?” He asked, waiting for her answer.

“Ah... well..” She began, but somehow, she couldn’t finish it. ‘I can’t say it...’ She sighed as she put her hand on Naruto’s head.

“It’s nothing. Have fun on the festival, ok?” She said while ruffling his hair.

‘That’s it?!’ Naruto thought, but shrugged it off. “Ok...” He said, as he ran away, towards the festival.

Tsunade sighed, seeing Naruto disappear in the darkness.  

“Tsunade-sama!” Shizune came running towards Tsunade with a panicked look on her face. “The enemies are coming closer to Konoha! What are your orders?!”

Tsunade turned around, a strict look on her face. “Gather all the Chunin and Jonin who are not on a mission! Order them to keep the enemies away from Konoha, especially from the festival!”

“Yes!” Shizune said, as she ran back to call all the Chunin and Jonin.

Tsunade looked one more time at where Naruto disappeared, before running after Shizune.   

-Summer festival-

Naruto saw the entrance of the festival already, many people entering it. He wondered how he will be able to recognise Sakura. But he didn’t had to think about that for long.

He found her.

She was standing there, looking around, seeming as if she was looking for someone. She looked beautiful in Naruto’s eyes; she had a kimono on, a red one, that is. Her right sleeve was longer than her left one, both decorated with strings that held many beads. Her whole kimono was decorated with an white pattern, what looked like spots. Her hair was in a ponytail, and, according to Naruto, she had chopsticks sticking out her ponytail. The had white shoes on, that almost looked like boots, if it wasn’t for the opening at the front, which showed her toes.

Naruto stood there, for quite a while, until Sakura called out to him. “Naruto! I’m here!” She waved at him, showing him where she was.

He shook his head, cleared his drool, and began to ran over to her. When he reached her, he again began to exclaim her from head to toe. This made Sakura blush.

“Wow,” He began, seemingly out of breath. “you look beautiful, Sakura-chan...”

“Really? I wasn’t sure if I should wear it... But I’m glad you like it.” She smiled, still blushing.

“Shall we go inside?” Naruto offered.

Sakura smiled at him, “Yes, let’s go!” She said, as she quickly grabbed his hand and went inside.

They played many games which made them child again; and not a responsible ninja. They could relax, as they enjoyed each others company.

“Look, look, Shikamaru! That’s Sakura! With Naruto!” Someone exclaimed from the back.

The other one sighed, “So what, Ino? Were are together here also, right?”

“Yeah, but... maybe they are dating?!” Ino exclaimed with a gasp.

“How troublesome... Ino, they don’t have to date in order to be here together. We aren’t dating either, and yet we are here together, right?” Shikamaru said, his eyes closed with a pained look.

“Shh, Shikamaru, I’m trying to listen!” Ino said sharply, earning a sigh from Shikamaru.

“You want some cotton candy, Sakura-chan?” Naruto asked, holding a cotton candy before her.

“I love cotton candy!” Sakura said, as she leaned forward to take a bite. “Mhhh!” She said smiling, with her eyes closed.

Naruto took a bite also, but some cotton remained on Naruto’s nose. This made Sakura giggle; that made Naruto confused.

“What?” He asked, as he saw her giggle.

“You have some cotton on your nose.” Sakura explained, as she reached out with her index finger and wiped it off his nose. She giggled more before licking the cotton off her finger.

“Did you saw that?! Shikamaru, did you-“

“No, I didn’t, Ino. Can we go now?” Shikamaru said, bored. He earned a glare from Ino, but he ignored it.

“But maybe they will kiss!”

“Although Naruto wouldn’t mind that, I don’t think Sakura will. Come on...” Shikamaru said, as he grabbed Ino’s hand, and led her far away from Naruto and Sakura.

‘Could this be the guy Sakura was talking about?’ Ino thought, but laughed afterwards. “Yeah, right!’

“This is s much fun, Naruto!” Sakura exclaimed, laughing.

“Yeah, and I-“ Naruto began to say, but was interrupted.

“Fireworks in about 10 minutes! Don’t miss it! Get ready for a great spectacle!”

“We have to see that, Naruto!” Sakura said.

“Yeah!” A sudden idea came to Naruto’s mind. “Sakura-chan, come, you have to see something.” Naruto said, as he grabbed her hand.

“But, the fireworks...” Sakura said, but followed Naruto anyway.

“Don’t worry,” He said, smiling. “we won’t miss a thing!” As soon as Naruto said that, he began to run, dragging Sakura with him. She noticed they went up, like running up a hill.

Suddenly, Naruto stopped, and quickly went behind her.

“Naruto...-“

“Sakura-chan, we are almost there. But I want it to be a surprise, close your eyes for a moment, ok?” Naruto said in a soft voice, holding his hands before her eyes.

Sakura’s heart began to beat faster, ‘What... is this feeling...? Why does my heart beat faster... again?’ She thought, as they suddenly stopped.

She felt Naruto removing his hands, “Ok, you can open your eyes now, Sakura-chan.” He said, still in a soft voice.

Sakura opened her eyes. Her sight was blurry for a bit, but it recovered quickly.

She gasped, “Oh, Naruto! This is beautiful! I can see the whole festival!” Sakura said, as she saw the lights of the festival beneath her. She also saw the Hogake Mountain in the distance; she actually saw whole Konoha.  

“It’s pretty cool, right?” Naruto said grinning, as he stood beside her.

“How did you knew about this place? I’ve never noticed it before!”

“Oh, I came... or I’m still coming here a lot.” He looked behind him, seeing a swing hanging on an old tree. There were he always sat when he felt lonely.

“Ah! The lights go off!” Sakura said, as she saw the lights go off one by one.

“The fireworks are going to begin.” Naruto said. And as soon as he said that, a few coloured beams went into the sky, and exploded with a loud bang to make more colours.

Sakura thought this was the best thing she ever saw.

Naruto thought the best thing he ever saw was standing right next to him.

Sakura sighed, not saying a word. And without warning, she leaned on his shoulder, enjoying the show.

‘Thank God its dark...” Naruto thought as he blushed furiously. He felt happy, like no one could beat him. He had everything he wanted; friends, ramen and Sakura.

While the two teens were enjoying the light show, someone was watching them from the dark.

“Tsk, the idiot.” The figure exclaimed. “Just wait Naruto, this time, we will finish it.”

To Be Continued
©2007-2010 ~Mistynia
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Author's Comments

Enjoy chapter 5!

Who is the mysterious somebody at the end?! 0_o :faint:

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Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
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Talking: “....”
Thinking: ‘....’

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto

Open Your Eyes
&&&&&&&&&&

Chapter 5: Fireworks and Cotton Candy

It seemed like the weather Gods were hearing Sakura’s call; it was the perfect weather for the summer festival. Sakura woke up with a smile, already looking forward to tonight.

Naruto thought so too. He felt he was dreaming the last three days. He feared he was going to wake up today, just before they went to the summer festival.

“Ouch!” Naruto exclaimed as he pinched himself. ‘Well,’ He thought. ‘you can’t be too sure.’ He did his morning ritual, which included eating breakfast at Ichiraku’s. He walked outside, greeted by the already warm morning sun.

‘It’s going to be a perfect day today!’ He said to himself, grinning.

He already reached Ichiraku’s, until a familiar voice called out to him; “Hey, Naruto!”

He recognised the voice, “Iruka-sensei!” Naruto exclaimed, turning around to greet him.

“Getting ramen again for breakfast?” Iruka asked smiling, actually already knowing the answer.

Naruto grinned, “Yep! You want to join me, Iruka-sensei?”

Iruka laughed, “So I can pay, again, huh?”

Naruto put his hands behind his head, “It’s for a good cause. I have to save money, you see...”

“Saving money? For what?” Iruka asked, a bit confused.

Naruto began to blush, “For tonight...”

“Mh? Tonight’s the festival right...? Don’t tell me... You have a date?!” Iruka asked dumbfounded.

This made Naruto blush harder, “S-so what?! Yes, I have a date! A-although, she would never call it a date...”

Iruka put his hand under his chin. “Oh? Then, it’s Sakura?”

“W-what?! How do you know, Iruka-sensei?!”

Iruka laughed, “Let’s discuss this inside, shall we, Naruto?” He led Naruto inside Ichiraku’s. As they sat down, ordering their ramen, they continued the conversation.

“So,” Iruka began. “you finally asked her out?”

“Finally? What do you mean by that?” Naruto asked, as he got his bowl with ramen.

“Well, it obviously you have a crush on her.” Iruka said, calmly.

Naruto blushed like mad, “I-I don’t know what you are talking about, Iruka-sensei!” He sputtered. Has it been that obvious?

“Come on, Naruto! It’s been obvious! You always had a crush on her since the Academy!” Iruka said, laughing. “So, who asked who?”

“Well,” Naruto said, his blush disappearing. “we actually asked each other at the same time. See, she came yesterday to my house to ask me. But we ended up asking each other.”

“Really? She wanted to ask you first?” Iruka said, a little shocked.

Naruto nodded, “I don’t know what happened, but it just turned out this way.” Naruto said, as he finished his bowl.

“Do you love her?” Iruka asked suddenly, seriousness clearly seen on his face.

Naruto did not flinch. He didn’t sputter, he didn’t go in denial. He blushed a bit though, thinking about his answer.

But he didn’t had to think for long, he could say for certain. He turned to Iruka, his blue eyes almost piercing him.

“Yes.”

That was his answer, no doubt heard in his voice.

Iruka smiled, seeing how much Naruto has grown. Not only in Ninjutsu, but also about personal things. Much like love.

“Do you think she’s in love with you?” Iruka now asked a difficult question for Naruto.

Naruto looked down, “I don’t know.” That was true, he really didn’t know.

“What makes you think she doesn’t?”

“Sasuke.” Naruto said, clearly saying his name.

Iruka sighed, he knew that this kind of answer would come. “She still loves him?”

“She waited for him again, three days ago.” Naruto said, tightly gripping the fabric of his pants.

Iruka sighed again. “But doesn’t that mean that she just wants him back?”

“I don’t know,” Naruto said again. “but I’m almost certain she doesn’t feel anything like that for me.”

“Almost?” Iruka asked, a little smile seen on his face.

“I can always hope, can’t I?” Naruto said, looking up to Iruka with a little smile on his face.

“Yes, you can.” Iruka smiled.

“Well, thanks for the ramen, Iruka-sensei! I gotta go now! Are you going to the festival too tonight?” Naruto asked, standing up.

“Ah, well, who knows.”

“Great! I see you then, maybe!” Naruto said, as he ran out Ichiraku’s, waving.

“Do your best, Naruto.” Iruka said, as he began to pay the bill.

-6:30 PM, Naruto’s house-

The day went fast, but that didn’t bother him. He couldn’t wait until he got at the festival. His clothes were, yet again, simple; long, blue pants with on top of that a simple black T-shirt and an completely orange jacket to finish it.

He wondered what Sakura is wearing. Is she going to wear a kimono, or just regular clothes? He couldn’t wait to find out.

He looked at his watch; 6:45. He should began walking. As soon as he stepped outside, he felt a cool breeze caressing his cheek. He looked up; it looked like it’s going to be a starry night.

‘Heehee, nothing can stop this night!’ Naruto thought.

Suddenly, he bumped into someone. But it felt soft, like pillows. Naruto didn’t mind the feeling, until he heard a very, very familiar voice.

“You like that, don’t you punk?!” An annoyed woman’s voice called down to him.

He looked up, still covered in the softness. His eyes went wide.

“Tsunade-obaasan!” He screaming, taking a step back. “Why did you do that?!”

“Tsk,” Tsunade retorted. “the nerve. You bumped into me, punk.”

“Right, well, gotta go, I have to go to the festival!” Naruto said, and just as he was about to leave, Tsunade called him back.

“Ah, Naruto, about that!”

Naruto stopped, and turned around. “Mh?” He asked, waiting for her answer.

“Ah... well..” She began, but somehow, she couldn’t finish it. ‘I can’t say it...’ She sighed as she put her hand on Naruto’s head.

“It’s nothing. Have fun on the festival, ok?” She said while ruffling his hair.

‘That’s it?!’ Naruto thought, but shrugged it off. “Ok...” He said, as he ran away, towards the festival.

Tsunade sighed, seeing Naruto disappear in the darkness.

“Tsunade-sama!” Shizune came running towards Tsunade with a panicked look on her face. “The enemies are coming closer to Konoha! What are your orders?!”

Tsunade turned around, a strict look on her face. “Gather all the Chunin and Jonin who are not on a mission! Order them to keep the enemies away from Konoha, especially from the festival!”

“Yes!” Shizune said, as she ran back to call all the Chunin and Jonin.

Tsunade looked one more time at where Naruto disappeared, before running after Shizune.

-Summer festival-

Naruto saw the entrance of the festival already, many people entering it. He wondered how he will be able to recognise Sakura. But he didn’t had to think about that for long.

He found her.

She was standing there, looking around, seeming as if she was looking for someone. She looked beautiful in Naruto’s eyes; she had a kimono on, a red one, that is. Her right sleeve was longer than her left one, both decorated with strings that held many beads. Her whole kimono was decorated with an white pattern, what looked like spots. Her hair was in a ponytail, and, according to Naruto, she had chopsticks sticking out her ponytail. The had white shoes on, that almost looked like boots, if it wasn’t for the opening at the front, which showed her toes.

Naruto stood there, for quite a while, until Sakura called out to him. “Naruto! I’m here!” She waved at him, showing him where she was.

He shook his head, cleared his drool, and began to ran over to her. When he reached her, he again began to exclaim her from head to toe. This made Sakura blush.

“Wow,” He began, seemingly out of breath. “you look beautiful, Sakura-chan...”

“Really? I wasn’t sure if I should wear it... But I’m glad you like it.” She smiled, still blushing.

“Shall we go inside?” Naruto offered.

Sakura smiled at him, “Yes, let’s go!” She said, as she quickly grabbed his hand and went inside.

They played many games which made them child again; and not a responsible ninja. They could relax, as they enjoyed each others company.

“Look, look, Shikamaru! That’s Sakura! With Naruto!” Someone exclaimed from the back.

The other one sighed, “So what, Ino? Were are together here also, right?”

“Yeah, but... maybe they are dating?!” Ino exclaimed with a gasp.

“How troublesome... Ino, they don’t have to date in order to be here together. We aren’t dating either, and yet we are here together, right?” Shikamaru said, his eyes closed with a pained look.

“Shh, Shikamaru, I’m trying to listen!” Ino said sharply, earning a sigh from Shikamaru.

“You want some cotton candy, Sakura-chan?” Naruto asked, holding a cotton candy before her.

“I love cotton candy!” Sakura said, as she leaned forward to take a bite. “Mhhh!” She said smiling, with her eyes closed.

Naruto took a bite also, but some cotton remained on Naruto’s nose. This made Sakura giggle; that made Naruto confused.

“What?” He asked, as he saw her giggle.

“You have some cotton on your nose.” Sakura explained, as she reached out with her index finger and wiped it off his nose. She giggled more before licking the cotton off her finger.

“Did you saw that?! Shikamaru, did you-“

“No, I didn’t, Ino. Can we go now?” Shikamaru said, bored. He earned a glare from Ino, but he ignored it.

“But maybe they will kiss!”

“Although Naruto wouldn’t mind that, I don’t think Sakura will. Come on...” Shikamaru said, as he grabbed Ino’s hand, and led her far away from Naruto and Sakura.

‘Could this be the guy Sakura was talking about?’ Ino thought, but laughed afterwards. “Yeah, right!’

“This is s much fun, Naruto!” Sakura exclaimed, laughing.

“Yeah, and I-“ Naruto began to say, but was interrupted.

“Fireworks in about 10 minutes! Don’t miss it! Get ready for a great spectacle!”

“We have to see that, Naruto!” Sakura said.

“Yeah!” A sudden idea came to Naruto’s mind. “Sakura-chan, come, you have to see something.” Naruto said, as he grabbed her hand.

“But, the fireworks...” Sakura said, but followed Naruto anyway.

“Don’t worry,” He said, smiling. “we won’t miss a thing!” As soon as Naruto said that, he began to run, dragging Sakura with him. She noticed they went up, like running up a hill.

Suddenly, Naruto stopped, and quickly went behind her.

“Naruto...-“

“Sakura-chan, we are almost there. But I want it to be a surprise, close your eyes for a moment, ok?” Naruto said in a soft voice, holding his hands before her eyes.

Sakura’s heart began to beat faster, ‘What... is this feeling...? Why does my heart beat faster... again?’ She thought, as they suddenly stopped.

She felt Naruto removing his hands, “Ok, you can open your eyes now, Sakura-chan.” He said, still in a soft voice.

Sakura opened her eyes. Her sight was blurry for a bit, but it recovered quickly.

She gasped, “Oh, Naruto! This is beautiful! I can see the whole festival!” Sakura said, as she saw the lights of the festival beneath her. She also saw the Hogake Mountain in the distance; she actually saw whole Konoha.

“It’s pretty cool, right?” Naruto said grinning, as he stood beside her.

“How did you knew about this place? I’ve never noticed it before!”

“Oh, I came... or I’m still coming here a lot.” He looked behind him, seeing a swing hanging on an old tree. There were he always sat when he felt lonely.

“Ah! The lights go off!” Sakura said, as she saw the lights go off one by one.

“The fireworks are going to begin.” Naruto said. And as soon as he said that, a few coloured beams went into the sky, and exploded with a loud bang to make more colours.

Sakura thought this was the best thing she ever saw.

Naruto thought the best thing he ever saw was standing right next to him.

Sakura sighed, not saying a word. And without warning, she leaned on his shoulder, enjoying the show.

‘Thank God its dark...” Naruto thought as he blushed furiously. He felt happy, like no one could beat him. He had everything he wanted; friends, ramen and Sakura.

While the two teens were enjoying the light show, someone was watching them from the dark.

“Tsk, the idiot.” The figure exclaimed. “Just wait Naruto, this time, we will finish it.”

To Be Continued
NaruSaku- OYE ch. 5 by ~Mistynia
Talking: “....” Thinking: ‘....’
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto
Open Your Eyes &&&&&&&&&&
Chapter 5: Fireworks and Cotton Candy
It seemed like the weather Gods were hearing Sakura’s call; it was the perfect weather for the summer festival. Sakura woke up with a smile, already looking forward to tonight.
Naruto thought so too. He felt he was dreaming the last three days. He feared he was going to wake up today, just before they went to the summer festival.
“Ouch!” Naruto exclaimed as he pinched himself. ‘Well,’
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“Ouch!” Naruto exclaimed as he pinched himself. ‘Well,’




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Enjoy chapter 5!

Who is the mysterious somebody at the end?! 0_o :faint:

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10: [link]
Chapter 12: [link]
Chapter 13: [link]
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~narusaku27:iconnarusaku27: Sep 1, 2007, 11:24:47 AM
i hav a feeling who dat is

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~Mistynia:iconmistynia: Sep 1, 2007, 12:31:08 PM
Who?! Nah, just kidding xD Let's see if you are correct :)

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~inukaglove:iconinukaglove: Sep 1, 2007, 10:55:43 PM
That was a great chapter. Can't wait for more. I'm probably guessing the obvious person is Sasuke wanting to kick Naruto's ass in which he won't.
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~Mistynia:iconmistynia: Sep 2, 2007, 1:46:12 AM
Don't say iiiiit! (Lol, just kidding xD)
Who knows? :3

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NaruSaku- OYE ch. 5Talking: “....” Thinking: ‘....’
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Chapter 5: Fireworks and Cotton Candy
It seemed like the weather Gods were hearing Sakura’s call; it was the perfect weather for the summer festival. Sakura woke up with a smile, already looking forward to tonight.
Naruto thought so too. He felt he was dreaming the last three days. He feared he was going to wake up today, just before they went to the summer festival.
“Ouch!” Naruto exclaimed as he pinched himself. ‘Well,’ NaruSaku- OYE ch. 5
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I COPIED ALL.
:iconmistynia:
Uhm, maybe this isn't your doing, but... what the hell?

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Did you do this again? Stop it, it's very annoying, not to mention extremely childish.

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yea im sorry to say this but even thow i liked it i mean the story was great but you should put the guy on oyure banned list

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